Thursday, February 23, 2012

Oh that she's frowning!...

oh that she's frowning
oh see her scorn
makes me go weak again
makes me love her more!

the way her eyes look at me
the way she tries to show anger
only tells me she loves me so -
only tells me to love her more!

she tells me she wont talk to me
but she wants me to talk right now!
she looks away but she looks for me -
only making me pine for her more!

she catches my smile
and tries to send back a frown..
to tell me hidden behind that veil
is a heart that loves me more :)

- David Antony, 02/23
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13 comments:

  1. shailThu Feb 23, 08:50:00 AM 2012

    Lovely! The fourth line ending with 'more' gives it a charm. The visuals that the words paint of young lovers is sweet :)

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    1. David AntonyFri Feb 24, 12:14:00 AM 2012

      :)
      and when smiles stop by
      and say hello
      they bring more smiles along
      and makes me want to write more :D

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  2. UshaSat Feb 25, 05:08:00 AM 2012

    Sweet, and charming, this verse :) More smiles coming your way... :)
    And isn't this how it is, with young love, and most time ageless love too :)

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    1. David AntonySat Feb 25, 11:25:00 AM 2012

      mucha gracias for the smiles - they are always welcome and such a joy to have!!!

      ...young and ageless
      till we are bent and toothless! :D

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    2. sa_antonyTue Feb 28, 04:27:00 AM 2012

      bent and toothless suits u more :)

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    3. David AntonyTue Feb 28, 04:40:00 AM 2012

      ha ha! ye saare.. we'll meet when we both are bent and toothless and exchange notes! :-P

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  3. UshaSat Feb 25, 10:53:00 AM 2012

    David, tagged you, and you can do this on your other blog if you wish, or right here, poetically :) :)
    http://ushus.wordpress.com/2012/02/26/the-elevenses-tag/

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  4. UshaSat Feb 25, 10:54:00 AM 2012

    Oh, you already got there? :P Now do it! :D

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    1. David AntonySat Feb 25, 11:16:00 AM 2012

      he he he... yeah, i did... so.. the procrastinator in me awakes, right now! :D

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  5. UshaSat Feb 25, 06:21:00 PM 2012

    Do leave a link for me to follow, ok? :)
    Waiting to read it!

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  6. sa_antonyTue Feb 28, 04:27:00 AM 2012

    This was good Dave!

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    1. David AntonyTue Feb 28, 04:41:00 AM 2012

      thank you for stopping by and for the encouragement Sophy Anne! :D

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  7. AnonymousTue Feb 28, 10:30:00 PM 2012

    Such a sweet lil thing, nice work Dave.

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