he spelt it wrong,
your name
first time around
and then
he faltered with the
punctuation
but did he get the
meaning wrong?
or did you notice
only such things
like grammar, but
not the lyrics of the song?
maybe!
you spelt it right,
his name
every time you did
so
and never faltered
with the commas
or with the million
rules of grammar
but did you convey
what your heart said?
or just noticed how
much and where he erred?
maybe!
maybe you both got
it wrong
first time around
and every time since
and maybe you spoke
on different planes
and thereby thought
about different stakes
maybe you were an
adjective as in the thesaurus
and
he was just a spelling mistake...
Oh wow wow! This is quite impressive. I just love this from start to finish.
ReplyDeleteGee! thank you for writing in... this again spun off a text conversation with a friend where were were texting and making crazy typos :D
Deletehah nice one da!
ReplyDeleteSophy saare :-o where you disappeared again??
Deletesugham elle?? baaki sab singing activities kaisa chal raha hai?
and thangggguez for stopping by!! :)
Awesomeness. Really you read well into words, no matter what the grammar or punctuation!
ReplyDelete:) and pinneyum, oru nanni... thank you for stopping by and the words that encourage me to write more!
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