The Road Ahead
i wanted to tell her -
tell her not to go
we'd walk so many miles
she, me, our dreams...
we'd decide...
decide to leave eve'thing behind
stranded on the walk of life
our dreams, me, her absence
i see the road ahead..
the road ahead to nowhere!
i will keep walking
thinking, wondering, crying...
i'd be eager to look back
look back on the path we trod
and remember the times of joy -
of laughter, fun, and smiles
i'd like to know -
know where this road ends
for when it does, i'd lay down
my dreams, my heart, my hopes...
David Antony,
25/05/2008
Good one pal
ReplyDeletekeep it rollin;)
Aww...good one! But I like your hopeful poems a lot more. :-)
ReplyDelete@Asha, holytrance -
ReplyDeletesab theek hai :-)
@Scribbler,
Thanks for stoppying by :-)
@Shrads,
Thangggue :-)
Hopeful poems come out of such moments.. so, :-)
hope ur the normal happy n smiling dave now!
ReplyDeleteits very well written,i did it love it....but its not good to know dat u were sad u know!
keep it up
@UD
ReplyDeleteam yapppppppppy n smiling ;-)
Thanggue for ur comments :-)
beautiful poem... sentences framed perfectly and pain revealed to the core...........I hope it is just a an imaginary poem....
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem......... sentences beautifully framed and pain felt to the core.....i hope it is just an imaginary poem because it reveals so much pain.....
ReplyDeletetoo good!!
ReplyDeletebravo..... bravo..... every word has a picture of the pain underwent............. never knew love can have such turning points...:(
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