Monday, November 19, 2007

It Rained Today...




it rained today..
and i thought about you...
the last time it rained..
we were together - me and you...

Well, the rains are here again,
soothing, soaking the land, the mind
if only you were with me,
a rainbow i could find..

i kept walking on -
raindrops hitting my head,
they kept speaking to my heart,
like a thousand words unsaid..

they spoke about those moments,
the ones i long to relive -
the moments i miss the most..
the magic those moments weaved...

it stopped raining,
but the land was wet, kissed by the rain..
and my mind, my eyes - wet..
kissed by the memories, by pain..

am waiting, waiting for you..
waiting to be together again,
and for the rainbow; for
when we're together, it will rain...

David Antony,
19/11/2007
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9 comments:

  1. PreetTue Nov 20, 09:24:00 AM 2007

    u know to make people experience ur emotions....wonderful wrk...worth the wait.... :D :P

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  2. SkinsleuthWed Nov 28, 06:57:00 AM 2007

    Oh Dave, this is wonderful. Brought tears in my eyes. :-)

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  3. JeanSat Dec 08, 05:58:00 PM 2007

    I loved what you have written!!! As preet said, you certainly know how to make people who read your words experience your emotions!!!

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  4. Girija VijayanMon Dec 10, 12:32:00 AM 2007

    ninte( hope u dont mind) manassile mazhaye, ormakalude, nombarathinte mazhaye vayikkunnavarkkum ariyan kazhiyunnu, David...

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  5. UnknownMon Dec 10, 10:44:00 PM 2007

    "Poignant" :)

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  6. UnknownTue Jan 08, 11:29:00 AM 2008

    tch tch david, the eternal romantic.....dat was so sweet and simple...strght fm da heart.

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  7. kaushikFri Jan 11, 04:12:00 PM 2008

    When is it goin to rain again...

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  8. UnknownSun Feb 17, 03:00:00 AM 2008

    poets's masterpiece! work of a true genius. simply marvellous!

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  9. The GeekieThu Aug 07, 07:54:00 PM 2008

    beautiful work

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