Rain your smiles
Rain your smiles on me..
and when it's flooded all around..
i'll ask for more rain to fall on me!
Rain your tears
Rain your tears on me..
and when it's rained all tears that you've got..
i'll pray that the tear-rain - may never be!
Rain your Love
Rain your Love all around..
and when it's flooded and raining still...
i'll be glad to plunge and get drowned!
David; 14/05/2007
hey nice 1!!keep it up ;-)
ReplyDeletehi bhaiya! it's xtremely awesome, keep writing such poems and u will get drowned with the rain of comments ;)
ReplyDeletehey dats a cute one!!!! May u rain many more swt poems lik these....so that i can drown in them!!!! hehehe... really wonderful...simple...bt so mch feelings it conveys....
ReplyDeleteOh Dave, this is soooooooo beautiful. Glad to know uve finally found time to write a poem. Keep it up! :)
ReplyDeletehi dave..
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comments.. Nice poems too.. can i know more about you?
Naj
@Pooja
ReplyDeleteThanggue Poo! :-)
@Chandru..
heyy Chandru.. i was surprised!!! thank u for coming by :-) and also for ur encouragement......
@Priti
Thanggue da!
i will try to write more...
@Shrads
hey Shrads...
thanggue too!!! ur comments mean a lot... now its the time of reverse-inspiration!
@Naj
u r welgummm!!!
and thanggue for ur comments...
sure u can knw more abt me - i hav commented on ur latest article on ur blog.. :-)
Smiles and regards,
Dave :-)
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ReplyDeleteOk i dont know who Mariel is...Hence i deleted the previous comment...
ReplyDeleteu write only poems? i am not a poem person!
but i shall try...
@White Diary/(Mariel?)
ReplyDeletehmm.. mostly, i write only poems... hav written some prose.. but havent posted yet...
ur write-ups are goood!
it wud be great to see ur poems.. if u start writing...
hey, amazing yaar... u are indeed extremely talented in the poetic front... very very good... :)
ReplyDeletehey,
ReplyDeleteu nvr told me how u found me or my blog.. and is ther any other way i can contact you????
gr8 one dave
ReplyDeleteloved it
hi,
ReplyDeletethanx for dropping by with a nice comment. But m still unable to fathom as to how u found me. u've got a nice blog here....agony, joy, contemplation, vulnerability, sensitivity, hope, all strung together into poetry... keep strumming the strings of ur heart...
Hi dave, my darlng sis and her dear colleague is being extremely kind to me…hey thanx again….now at the risk of sounding like a mutual backslapper…i’ve got tell u that i’m yet to come across a guy’s blog dedicated to poetry that’s sensitivity writ large….its a pleasant breather….so breeze in more of ur poetry…..
ReplyDeletenice meeting u
vidya